Ooh, I'm first, for the first time! ^^ Whee.

I like the lighting on the figure, and the unique angle. The way you've captured her expression leaves me wondering - Is she mad? Does she want something? hehe. It's always good to have questions like that when looking at a piece, I think anyway. Good stuff! And nice use of blurring as well. +5

Nice, but because of the angle and the diagonal lines, the chest becomes a non-functional 'empty' space. +7

nice call artoonator, the chest is all empty space, tough depth of field though to blur the human body if ur shooting the face though, nice pose by the model, she worked well with you

I find this very sensual.

She looks like she is stuck in a box !
The angel for me is wrong and I dont like the way she is looking up the frame...

In addition the high viewpoint has meant she has lost her top lip !

Agree with others about the angle...

a little space to the right to show a lil bit of her hair I think.
This would look splendid too in soft BW.
And I agree with Robert, this is sensual

i think the picture would work
even if she were ugly...nice stuff
btw i like the "empty" space

I am not a critic. So, the only thing that I can say is that this is a beautiful photo.
+10
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Bea

Nice model!
I do not like her look with the eyes... Looks strange?!

Agree on the angle discussion above.

I like her eyes ...and the smile.

I think the shoulder and chest takes too much attention and distract from her beautiful face......Nice smile!
Carlos

Nice lighting and model...

Agree with Arne about the empty space...
...but very nice in any case!

is this your lady?
she's beautiful, very nice portrait too, keep it Bartek

The composition seems off...it's too heavy on the right-side. Of course you wanted the emphasis on her eyes, but, then why all the extra space on the left? I agree with Arne. If you had her wearing something black in form to contrast the right side in focus, that would have helped. Other than the composition, everything is nice, but nothing new in concept. She isn't personalized in a way either, she looks like 100 other girls I've seen in photos before, if you know what I mean?+7

Very ggod portrait!!! Nice eyes, cool composition, nice colors...!!!
Great shot!!